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mrpsycho2000

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it wasn't bad

it wasn't bad to me. my only critisim is that it was way too much like linkin park at the start were as the dubstep on the 2nd half of the song was more unique but since the track is not long to begin with it works well as sort of a intro r interlude that often comes with remixes of other songs. I write this review in regards too your version of linkin parks song and odds r someone will flag this and your song could be removed like one of mine did. I still like this as a interlude but not as a full song.

montehawks responds:

yeah if definitely not finished yet. i still have another 3-4 minutes to add. Thanks for the review :)

more of a loop than a song

this is more of a loop than a song r at least it works better as a loop. The continues sound got on my nerves after 15 seconds. I wont write too much like the previous person, will only say you need to explore alot of verious dubstep songs and find wich sounds best to you and try match that and push further with whatever samples you can create r find. practice makes perfect.

NightmareDuck responds:

Thanks. I'll do that.

-NightmareDuck

very nice

i found it to be very nice as a intro into a song r as you put a loop. breaking it up and puting it too a beat is by choice and i would say it would work well either way if the need was there to go ferther with the track. I do hope thou that you actualy chose the sounds rather than leting fl do most the work for you if you used fl that is. leting a program create the song with random sounds you have selected and calling it yours is kind of bad, cant say i havn't thought about doing it my self but they often come across as random generated easy to make. Anyway i am rambeling on. well done.

Tyrzi responds:

Well, depends who is thinking about "own" sounds. If person tells to me that "You used WASP XT, it's actually fl's tool so every sound in this track is basically fl's own sounds" Well that person is kinda right but If person think about that I set up every effects in that specific instrument so it's sounds will be correct.. well .. I think it's actually something around 75% my sound and 25% fl's, and every instrument has their own set ups etc and then i put all in action.
But yeah, your review tells me that I deserve 8 from your opinions :)
Thanks for review and all.

i hope

i hope you dont plan on selling the album esp since i doubt linkin park would allow you to take there lyrics and put them too your music. Even still you would have to be carefull with what your doing, you know how these bands get when they beleive there music is being stolen, lawsuitlawsuitlawsuit. the music matches the music but i much prefer linkins parks version so if they were a 10 for that track on a scale i would put yours ways below at about 4 but since i am feeling kind i will give you a 5.

Whatihavegot responds:

It's not going to be sold in stores. Just for download on mediafire.

i dont know

althou i liked the start and the background ambient sound you had it kind of fell apart for me past halfway with more being addad. To me a loop is a continues sample of a sound being done over and over again with very little being addad but your song had more than just a few with some changes within in so it works as a song more than a loop. I liked the start and some of the sounds but overall it didn't work for me.

vtv201 responds:

okies, thank you alot for the feed back, will keep the looping issue in mind :} and will keep that in mind for my necxt electronica song i have got in production :}

repeatrepeat and dead

first of its technicaly not drum and base but closer to dance r techno because of the hi hat and drum continuation. the base sounds good but its very repetive and becomes anoying to me but thats my opinion. i score it 3. again 23 listens and 0 votes. bad people.

Drony responds:

Yeah I'm not good with genre's

Thanks for taking the time to review

it became too generic

parts of the song was good but you took so long to get too it and with the beat being near the end with a change in sound it becomes generic and almost like your let the program create the music rather than you actualy puting the music together. my advice would be to take the middle section and put it too the beat and break it up with the sound from start and pick it up as it goes along to highten the energy. The sounds is there you just need to better control them.

Hades369 responds:

Thanks for the tip, during this project i accidently made a really good loop. I don't think it fit so well in this one. I'll be using it in a future song. Mainly i've been using projects like this to test my creativity and gather really well made loops. It'll take some time for me to reach a point of perfection and people like you with un-appeasable opinions are perfect to help me gain some talent with FL. I post these on newgrounds strictly for criticism. When i get much better with FL i will ditch this account and start a new one. Thanks again.

- Blake

no author comment?

no author comment indacates you have nothing to say and could of uploaded this for upload sake wich is a waste of time to me. the beat and scratch is good and with the name i think its ment for something. I would suggest if you made this for someone to put too a game r animation to just send it too them via e-mail. thats what it comes across like. for better review i need more input from you so i cant give a vote on the icon but i will personaly give you a 3.

Psychopath responds:

It's a part of a soundtrack I'm providing for a series called Two Wiggers by Robert "Pliskin99" Fagan. The character this loop is for is a character called Piffman, an anthropomorphic marijuana leaf whom of which is a part of the Bloods and deals, what else, drugs.

If you look up my other audio submissions for this year, you can see the rest of the soundtrack.

my only tip

my only tip would be to get someone else to do the other voices r try to change your voice but coming up with the script for this is something i probably couldn't do my self so i cant be too negative about this else i come across as a dik. 3 votes 22 listens -.- you can at least get a review from someone who takes his time to listen with thought.

JaShinYa responds:

I appreciate you taking the time to write a review! I agree, this isn't my best work, but it was still fun doing!

its not bad

I enjoyed alot of elements in this song its really not bad but its down side is that of choice, ie if its not your taste in music it doesn't push the boundrys and becomes boring. i would say its close to dance techno than misc but besides this its not a bad track so i score you 6. keep up the work.

Xarosas responds:

Not Bad? I just can't stand for that!

Thank you Mr. Psycho for your review. I appreciate the fact you're judging the song and being honest about your opinion.

I'll try even harder to do better than "Not Bad".

Until then, I'll see you on the Audio Portal

~Xar.

I currenly have no job due to panic disorder but i've done art all my life wether it be photo minipulation r music. chek out my website for more info. I also have music on reverbnation.

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